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I am walking alone along this road,
It is too hard to carry all of this heavy load.
I try to scream, I try to shout,
But nobody hears it, there is no doubt.
Dark clouds are above me,
I am not a man as I used to be.
I walk down this road painfully, but I don’t stop,
I shall not give up until I’ll lifelessly drop.
I sit to rest, on this heavy rock,
And I get an enormous electricity shock.
It came out of nowhere; it came from the sky;
It was a sign that if I’ll stay here, I’ll die.
I stood up and walked away,
And suddenly the rock and its surroundings started to decay.
I thanked the God for this great sign,
As painful as it was, it saved the life of mine.
It is too hard to carry all of this heavy load.
I try to scream, I try to shout,
But nobody hears it, there is no doubt.
Dark clouds are above me,
I am not a man as I used to be.
I walk down this road painfully, but I don’t stop,
I shall not give up until I’ll lifelessly drop.
I sit to rest, on this heavy rock,
And I get an enormous electricity shock.
It came out of nowhere; it came from the sky;
It was a sign that if I’ll stay here, I’ll die.
I stood up and walked away,
And suddenly the rock and its surroundings started to decay.
I thanked the God for this great sign,
As painful as it was, it saved the life of mine.
OK I can call it unfinished also but again it will do for now. Planing to rewrite it too It resembles a part of my life.
© 2008 - 2024 The-Phoenix-of-Chaos
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"As painful as it was, it saved the life of mine. "
I love that line. It is win.
I don't have much for creative criticism (I'm not good at that)
I love that line. It is win.
I don't have much for creative criticism (I'm not good at that)